Thursday, June 22, 2006

dhundla sa rasta hai..

Just wrote this...

dhundla sa rasta hai..
kuch dikhayi nahi deta...
rasta sahi hai galat
kuch samaj mein nahi aata

rasta sahi hai samaj
agar hum aage badhe
saath mein humare
darr bhi saath chal degaa

galat hai yeh socha humne
piche mude to doosra rasta dikha
khushi ke maare jhoom uthe hum
paanchi ki tarah ude uss disha

aage badhne hi lage the hum
acahanak hume kuch dikha wahan
dher saare log khade hain
kuch to baaten kar rahen hain

chupke se unke baaten sunne
hum bhi pahunche unke paas
bade log the, badi si baaten
humne to kabhi na aisa suna

kya hum bhi aise hosakte hain
aise soch mein pad gaye hum...
sochte sochte chalten rahen
doosra hi rasta milgaya

phir se humne dekha uss disha
hairaan hogaye hum
dhundla sa rasta hai phir se
kuch dikhai nahi deta

Well before I came to this ending I had this (D said this ending is perfect.. though he never read the original one)

kabada kar diya humne poem ka..
kya karen IT mein hai hum

5 comments:

Sujit said...

hehe.. nice one!.. good effort!.. better dont look back when you are moving front!.. back .. back and more backwards the same starting point where you started everything!..

Alapana said...

Apne kadam hain,apna jahaan hain,raastha tumhe thai karna hain dost,wahi karo jo man ko bhaaye,aisa nahi hota hamesha ki jahaan bahuth log chale wahi sahi hain,apni disha khud chuno aur nikal pado zindagi ke taraf,har chunauthi ko jeeto,aakhir jeet haar mein hi zindagi hain,haarne par maayus na hona,jeet ne kushi se tahar math jaana,chalte raho manjil kabhi tho milegi:)

Vinod Ramamoorthy said...

dhundla sa rasta hai
kya karen IT mein hai hum!!

Just made it short ...But still makes sense ..:D

Nice stuff ! :)

the lost one... said...

hey aarti wats wrong wit u long drives se yeh naya shauk kya pal liya nut gd attempt hehehe

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